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Hunk Strongthighs

Yes! I want to do something like this too! (not this specific genre but a series of some kind) I'm a no0b, too, so I'm just going to stick around and see how you do it, lol

9 years agoReply

Bobby

Tbh it's just an interesting format I'm playing around with a little bit, I'm enjoying it so far. Stick around, that's exactly what I like to hear!

9 years agoReply

Alef Magnus

Wow this is some next level shhh. Although I had a similar concept before, let's see what this one has got.

Edit: Wow, did I just forget that I already commented on this before. But did you change the Intro. Must be why I forgot.

9 years agoReply

Bobby

Don't get your hopes up too high...;)

9 years agoReply

hkirtz

Love this story and cant wait for it to continue. What happened to the police officer? Also I find while there was some buildup to Ruby betraying it seemed like it happened really fast.

9 years agoReply

Bobby

It's not done yet, I promise;) I'm gonna get around to writing more pretty soon, I have the next couple chapters mapped out. I appreciate the feedback, I'm definitely gonna explore both of those things a little bit more sometime soon

9 years agoReply

Alef Magnus

Didn't know you wrote Science Fiction, now I don't know what to read first, Redfall or this? *insert why not both gif*

9 years agoReply

Bobby

You're the man! I haven't given up on this one quite yet, and I actually started off writing sci-fi! Kinda my first love, so to speak.

...That being said, I'm a lot more passionate about Redfall right now.

I think I'm gonna read Glory this weekend, I just haven't had a ton of free time. I promise;)

9 years agoReply

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