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阿賴耶 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 1!
天上的星星是靈魂變成，想起了獅子王~
2 years agoReply
萌鼠
感謝阿賴耶打賞，星星與靈魂讓您想起獅子王，滿滿的童年感^-^
2 years agoReply
黑色簽字筆 M.
音樂好聽喔 ~ 好用心
2 years agoReply
萌鼠
謝謝您，有發現音樂^^，希望您會喜歡。
2 years agoReply
道葉
劇情挺精彩的，加油~
不過建議在比較長段的描述中，多斷行會比較容易讀
不然寫得很好的內容也容易被忽略，會很可惜
2 years agoReply
萌鼠
感謝道葉的回饋，我會努力去做調整，希望可以讓內容描述得更清楚，感恩。
2 years agoReply
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