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roseflair7860

Hi Sam,
I loved your story your characters and pacing were so vivid, it felt like a graphic novel in motion! I’m a professional comic/Webtoon cover artist and currently open for commissions. I’d love to bring your characters to life through custom covers or illustrations.
Let’s connect on Discord if you're interested: patricia_castillo55

10 hours agoReply

So, I decided to give this story a shot. I normally don't read wholesome stories very often, but I have to admit that I thoroughly enjoyed this. It really does have that ghibli vibe to it, and I love that.

In all honesty, if you could just take some time to polish up the grammar, this story would be perfect. You have some great descriptions, and the characters are rather memorable. I was able to visualize the story very well, only hindered by the occasional awkward sentences and misspellings.

Fantastic work, and I am definitely going to check out 'Stew' now. Great job. Keep it up! 😄

1 year agoReply

Lamington

Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such a lovely review on Soup!

I'm so glad my vibe got across and the visualization was what I was going for.

The spelling may be a bit off because it hasn't been edited since it's been made. I'll have to go through all of my stories and touch them up to make sure they are perfect!

I hope you enjoy Stew!

1 year agoReply

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