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Even better than the first. This one felt like it had a lot more happening in it. Not saying that to diss the first story as it was also good, but I liked that this one had a bit more plot to it. I also appreciated that you managed to keep the same vibes going in this story that made the first one so enjoyable. You really nailed the entire wholesome bit, which is hard to do without sounding cheesy. I applaud you for that.

Like I suggested in the first story, all you really need to do to make this story shine is fix some of the grammatical errors and misspellings. You delivered on everything else. 😉

1 year agoReply

Lamington

I'm over the moon that you took the time to read Stew and see what I was going for!

I really did want this one to have more in it, so it isn't a diss at all! Soup was the set-up while Stew has more meat to it 😂

I'm so happy you got what I was going for without going too dark or cheesy. It was a tough one, but I think it came out quite nicely.

I'll fix up those errors for sure once I get all my unfinished works done 😊

1 year agoReply

@Lamington , It definitely came out nicely. I think I read on your contest submission that you have one more planned? I'll most certainly read it when it comes out. 😉

1 year agoReply

Lamington

@Jay Ellis, yes I've got one more planned with some big changes coming 😁 I can't wait to get it done and added to Soup and Stew

1 year agoReply

@Lamington , I look forward to it. 🙂

1 year agoReply

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