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世水
守塔人大大描寫畫面、台詞、轉場什麼都很自然流暢。政策施行方面談論的很寫實細膩，有種「身歷其境」的感覺，能隔著文字充份感受到在辦公室的氛圍，這點很棒👍
適合愛看社會寫實類型的讀者
8 months agoReply
守塔人
謝謝世水大大的欣賞，能讓讀者有畫面是對我很大的鼓舞！自己現在回頭看也發現不少語句不順的地方，請多多包涵，一起進步。
8 months agoReply
世水
@守塔人,我看的時候感覺還行🤣！至少知道大意要表達什麼。
好哦～ 一起加油進步👍
8 months agoReply
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