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第一頁的方格旁白是主角的獨白

但第三頁的旁白卻變成了戲外觀點的世界觀解說，有點割裂

假如可以繼續用主角視點來解釋說不定會更好？

4 days agoReply

好！努力學習！感謝意見！！

4 days agoReply

24歲，是學生！
大學畢業後的第一份工真的很難很難找……

5 days agoReply

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4 days agoReply

19HR

5 days agoReply

MotPanda 莫盼達

畫面可愛節奏也很舒服的漫畫！

5 days agoReply

謝謝啊！

5 days agoReply

sponsored 1000 for Issue 1!

今餐就食蒸魚飯

5 days agoReply

我驚食左會肚痛。。。唔好食呢條魚w

5 days agoReply

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