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Because
感動
😭😭😭😭
一幕幕從現眼前
6 years agoReply
Because
很多篇
6 years agoReply
Minz月月
不用全部看啦😅有興趣在看下去就好，隨意隨意~
謝啦😉
6 years agoReply
Because
@月魂伶,我會肝完的
6 years agoReply
Because
@月魂伶,感覺你的底蘊是深厚的，但長句子就有點怪，很難讀（我習慣讀出聲的。），其他故事方面……要再咀嚼一下。
6 years agoReply
Minz月月
@Because ,好的，冗言綴字我多加留意： )
6 years agoReply
Because
@月魂伶,喜歡你的寫作，詞彙很夠，這時作者本身閱讀量的證明，最討厭那些大概性形容（她很美麗、他人很好……）蒼白而沉悶，但你沒有這種情況，不錯。
6 years agoReply
Minz月月
@Because , 就是錯字有點多，後面幾篇我下週回學校再改改，你有空再看？((很不好意思自己的作品傷人眼睛😅
6 years agoReply
Because
@月魂伶,沒事啊…因為邊工作邊看，看得比較慢。
6 years agoReply
Because
很篇，要看一段時間。
6 years agoReply
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