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The summary is nice.

But to be honest, you need to work on your punctuation and your way of telling the story. You need to be a little more descriptive about the mushroom boys and the criminal.

4 years agoReply

redvaelvet

This is a really good book and I really like it 🥰

4 years agoReply

S.Amari

If I'm being completely honest the summary was pretty great but I do have a question I didn't quite understand what you meant by mushroom boys. Are they mushrooms that are boys or are they boys that like mushrooms? Overall that sounds like a great plot writing an apocalypse story is really hard and yo idea sounds amazing I can't wait to read it

4 years agoReply

T. S. Stone

Oh, I'm glad you liked the idea. What I meant by mushrooms boys was that they were mushrooms. The story takes place in a world of mushroom people. They look exactly like mushrooms, but with faces and little stubby hands and legs.

4 years agoReply

S.Amari

@T. S. Stone, Well can't wait to read it

4 years agoReply

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