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Nor

You're so right! I need to know when you publish the next issue- I can't wait! You should definitely publish this when it's finished. Also, do you know what is going to happen at the end?

9 years agoReply

Frances

Thank you SOO much! I do have a good idea because its all tied into this faux WW2 world I've been working on, but I NEED to find my notes on this thing! Get myself organized! haha

9 years agoReply

Nor

how much have you planned? This story needs an intricate plot and so you should start deciding what the ending will be (not to intrude as its going really well so far)

9 years agoReply

Frances

It's all tied in with the world my stories 'tick of the idle hour' and 'wolf in waiting' are in, I have the ultimate end in mind, especially for the city of Tyr. I'm still working out the final specific details for this one. Your enthusiasm makes me feel so good!! I need to spit out the next chapter of this one!

9 years agoReply

Nor

@Frances, I am now desperate to know what happens! Now stop wasting your time talking to me and start writing!

9 years agoReply

Bluemoon Scriptor

This is fantastic!!
From your cleverly selected images to set the mood of the chapter, to your carefully constructed characters, setting and plot.
I particularly like how your characters interact with eachother.You have veered away from Anson being the "bully" as such to a much more complex creature.
I look forward to how each character develops, along with your intriguing ideas and plotline.

Continue!

9 years agoReply

Frances

Oh my goodness! What a reassuring review! I love this story but have felt somewhat insecure about my pacing of the plot. You just made me feel SO much better! Thank you so much!!!

9 years agoReply

Bluemoon Scriptor

@Frances, You shouldn't be insecure! It's great story - perfect for this cultural climate. I kept walking to my bookcase thinking it was a book until I realized it was yours!

9 years agoReply

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