Comments - 第二屆黑正杯創作挑戰【棋】 | Penana

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Comments - 第二屆黑正杯創作挑戰【棋】 | Penana

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其實用黑白棋的想法不錯，只是我讀到中間有點角色混亂，分不清誰是誰，下次注意這一點就能更好了，加油💪

3 years agoReply

好噠！謝謝大大的鼓勵！❤️
名字其實是因為主角角度造成的諧音梗w不過確實容易混亂！可能用第三人稱寫會好點！
下次試試！謝謝大大的獎勵！❤️

3 years agoReply

@良緣, 下一屆也歡迎參加😙

3 years agoReply

@黑正,好噠！謝謝大大！❤️😆

3 years agoReply

@良緣, 下一屆開始了，歡迎來參加🥳

3 years agoReply

@黑正,好的😆 謝謝大大提醒～

3 years agoReply

@黑正,好的😆 謝謝大大提醒～

3 years agoReply

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