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Comments - 【第八屆】你的作品，我的❤得＆一周年指名特殊企劃！心得機率雙倍來啦！ | Penana

Comments - 【第八屆】你的作品，我的❤得＆一周年指名特殊企劃！心得機率雙倍來啦！

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感謝大大點評！這陣子有些忙，沒有上penana，現在才看到了大大用心的分析與評論，抓出了很多自己讀的時候不會察覺到的細節（比如說人物塑造和一些不恰當的地方）

再次感謝大大用心點評，我會繼續努力進修的！

1 year agoReply

寫作加油~~

1 year agoReply

@清夢

1 year agoReply

寫得實在太用心，哭了

1 year agoReply

謝謝你的欣賞 :3

1 year agoReply

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