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Comments - 詞裏古詩 | Penana

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嗯，憶江南，真寫盡了明月何皎皎的情味呢！（嗯，對，憶江南，嗯！）
以小令表達出五言古詩的情意，真是很厲害～

6 years agoReply

感謝！
但…總覺得第3、4句構有點不順口…XD

6 years agoReply

@霧搖山亭,既然你都提起了....那兩句基本上有對到會比較好，像“冬季猶存梅雪傲，春時期盼放桃紅”的二二三二二三。不過不影響詩意依然是最重要的。

6 years agoReply

@零兒,哇！好…好高深的學問啊！沒錯，七字句應需二二三對着較順口(習慣了六字的《如夢令》，基本上只要二二二，放三個詞語便順口XD)

6 years agoReply

五言古詩竟可取萃成小令喔~~~

6 years agoReply

玩點新意思嘛XD目標是寫完十九首！順便學學古人的文筆風格！

6 years agoReply

@霧搖山亭,十九首嗎？！會不會太艱巨了TT

6 years agoReply

@簡潔,古詩十九首嘛！加上上面的，只差七篇XD

6 years agoReply

@霧搖山亭,喔？是這樣喔。。。我還没看過這個系列呢。。。

6 years agoReply

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