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凌夏
受寵若驚，沒想到小夜大大的評價這麼高，很高興也很感謝，我們會繼續讓作品完整度更高的，謝謝講評！
4 months agoReply
星雨夜
謝謝夏夏的邀約～(*ˇωˇ*人)
一起加油吧～～
4 months agoReply
Endlessly xia
謝謝星雨夜老師的心得～
感謝老師看得這麼細並且提出許多有用的建議，有勞了。（蝦蝦鞠躬
4 months agoReply
星雨夜
謝謝蝦蝦～不敢稱為老師啦，(//´/◒/`//)但希望這些對妳有實質的幫助，如果有想法或意見，隨時歡迎你和夏夏指教或私訊討論
4 months agoReply
Endlessly xia
@星雨夜,好的！！再次感謝！！
4 months agoReply
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