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有一點想請你留意，有些句子應該需要以標點來分開，就例如最後外婆的那句說話：「我煮了你最喜歡吃的蕎麥通心粉有煎蛋喔。」
這裡應該是：「我煮了你最喜歡吃的蕎麥通心粉，還有煎蛋喔。」
正確的分段分句，會令文章更順暢，讀者看得更舒服～