Comments - 競速飛行員與奇蹟 | Penana

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Comments - 競速飛行員與奇蹟 | Penana

Comments - 競速飛行員與奇蹟

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沒想到那麼快就完了，至少最後所有人都得到快樂，關於Yuna的描寫可以再多點？

可以嘗試運用對話和敘述，我看到兩者常常分開，合起來會有更好的效果

3 years agoReply

謝謝，我正在寫Blade 和Daenerys 如何發現並收養Yuna。

3 years agoReply

當作番外篇

3 years agoReply

@Tiffany , 挺好的點子

3 years agoReply

@芝沫,完成，之後是Yuna遇到了她的秘密守護者

3 years agoReply

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