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2 months agoReply
黑耀神
來拜讀了！「天擇」這個很現實殘酷，不過一章12分鐘應該是近4000字了~厲害呀！有時我只更到2000字內。
3 months agoReply
就只是一隻大貓
拜讀稱不上，互相交流交流!
我本來也是想2000字一更的，但是戰場這段總覺得段在哪裡都不太對，所以就索性寫下去了!
後續大戰的劇情我也是打磨了蠻久的，有興趣歡迎觀看~~
3 months agoReply
黑耀神
歡迎多串門找靈感(◑‿◐)可以分兩段呀，加入一些被天擇離棄的小人物也許是個不錯的群象效應。
3 months agoReply
就只是一隻大貓
@黑耀神,故事後面會有的，被天擇遺棄的人物可多著，修仙世界最不缺的就是螻蟻XD
3 months agoReply
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