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感覺都用敘述的方式來描寫背景有點可惜，如果能直接寫一點與父母的互動可能生動🤔

2 years agoReply

好的！謝謝你的意見，我會審視文章修改的～我也覺得不夠生動😂

2 years agoReply

為了利益才在一起的父母，感覺也只會把小孩當工具🥹

2 years agoReply

是的😔之後歐若拉會被他們利用然後慘死

2 years agoReply

歐若拉其實想得到父母的關心吧，才會希望明天到來🙈

2 years agoReply

我想也是，她心底裡都是期待父母能夠讚賞她😢

話說羅羅拉看得好快，不急的，別勉強自己喔🥹

2 years agoReply

@芝沫,奇幻類作品會看比較快，剛好昨晚有時間🥹

2 years agoReply

@羅羅拉, 好的🥰

2 years agoReply

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