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綠木柚子(ゆず) sponsored 100coins for Issue 2!
2 years agoReply
W sponsored 500coins for Issue 2!
用心的評價，好評
2 years agoReply
滔江社
謝謝！
2 years agoReply
凶讀 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 2!
我之後會好好注意這些部分的表達！感謝藍鳥的心得！這部作品實在是黑歷史XDDD
2 years agoReply
滔江社
謝謝你的打賞啊，你的作品真的很有吸引力，單純就是結尾和中間一些細節缺乏了點。之後再多加改進，一定會越來越好的👍🏻👍🏻
2 years agoReply
凶讀
@宇智波_藍鳥,👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
2 years agoReply
晴空下的雨
飛機形容的太貼切了吧！

這部作品真的很不錯，就是結局⋯⋯😮‍💨藏太多東西沒交代了。
2 years agoReply
滔江社
的確啊
2 years agoReply
滔江社
@凶讀
2 years agoReply
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