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洛卡
這邊的對話突然暫停會令讀者覺得疑惑,我建議完整寫完一個章節才發佈,做當小小意見參考一下好了
1 week agoReply
伊瑣
感謝您的建議，但是我的本意正是想讓讀者疑惑喔。多虧你的提醒，我意識到2、3回閱讀體驗斷裂的問題，並稍做了調整。
希望您喜歡我的作品
1 week agoReply
Yesin Yagami
可以
我家廁所有八間
要用免治的嗎？😂
2 weeks agoReply
伊瑣
Interesting 下一章預計晚上發，記得來看看喔
2 weeks agoReply
Yesin Yagami
@伊瑣,沒問題的 務必讓我拜讀
2 weeks agoReply
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