Comments - Dark's Writing Tips

Search stories, writers or societies

Show More Tags

Continue ReadingClear All

What Others Are ReadingRefresh

See more results for ""

Never miss what's happening on Penana!

Turn on notifications

Later

robintvale

Yes it is. What I ment to say is some cridics don't bother to read more then a chapter and or have misconceptions about it if they haven't seen it before. I have had several on Wattpad though that got into it right away and loved it. 😎

So my guess is a persons temperament could also play into how willing they are to accept this pov. Many see the lack of filler words as a mistake.😫 *Sigh!*

I start the pov gradually with some deep pov elements in chap 1, then it goes deeper each chapter. And pulls pack as needed. I love this pov it's a perfect fit.

Did you too, try other povs before settling on deep pov?

8 years agoReply

Monos Alba

Second Person is very fun to write in, I'm surprised people don't try it more often. Though, you've been writing most of this in it~

8 years agoReply

robintvale

That's cool to find a writer that uses that pov. It's used less because it's harder for most readers to become immersed into the story.

8 years agoReply

Monos Alba

@robintvale, yes and no, I find. With my work, people have told me that it's hard at first because they're not used to it, but adjust quickly. I think people should try it out more, it seems to be the most immersive.

8 years agoReply

Back to Story