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aefadawsd

A chill seriously ran through my spine in the spear scene. That was an intense read. That was so awesome. You started out strong, and the ending made me smile. Nice.

8 years agoReply

Heminor

Thank you! :D
Thats some high praise, to make a chill rin through YOUR murderuous mind :PIt still needs editing because some of the writing is mundane and repetitive, but im too lazy... it cuts like a whole 20 minutes off the production process.

8 years agoReply

aefadawsd

@Heminor, Well, it was just that great. And I never put that many Spears into a person. I am cruel but you are even more so.

Yeah, it needs to be edited a little but I highly doubt that it would take 20 minutes.

8 years agoReply

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