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楠都月
用片皮鴨來形容實在讓人感到有點不舒服了。 雖然只是故事情節，但個人看法來說，雖然欺凌行為真的很過分，但上升到殘忍殺死也未免太過了。 不過我很好奇什麼他想了解細節，他是想了解美妮的心理嗎? 
4 days agoReply
黑霧
已經盡可能避免血腥刺激，然後也不怕直說，應該反抗但確實反抗也該有尺度，只是能夠掌控的人總是強者，弱者只能竭盡全力
因為弱者的反擊一旦沒解決問題，十有八九只來遭受更強的欺凌
（就當故事來看啦）
至於大衛的動機，如你所說是要瞭解美妮，他的職責就是支援少女。
3 days agoReply
罪夜
從回憶的觀點來看殺人場面感覺還是少了點刺激感呢，要是能直接演出當時的場景就好了😂
2 years agoReply
黑霧
這個在寫的時候有想過，但最終是考慮到不想把焦點放在刺激的畫面上，而是比較細膩的角色思考與動機，便以回憶的方式呈現。
2 years agoReply
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