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有無餘
最大的問題就是在於你沒用中文標點符號～而且某些標點符號是錯誤運用的，這導致我在讀你的文章時完全失去了節奏。其實寫完之後你可以自己讀一下（不是背書那種不帶停的讀），就可以大概知道哪裡用得不對了～

話說我也試過無意聽到別人說的真心話_(´ཀ`」 ∠)_從此以後我都不太信人xd
4 years agoReply
>w<_gg
多謝提點owo
4 years agoReply
有無餘
@>w<_gg,哈哈這也算不上提點啦= =加油～ 
4 years agoReply
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