Okay I am very, very late to comment, I am so sorry about that!! 
First, wonderful job with describing the ocean and the view. Ur use of words is fantastic. 


Second, You blew me away with Golden Waters thing, you sneaky little thing! Very impressive technique! 

Nice job on the rhetorical questions, i like it when writers use rhetorical questions in their works. I dunno why I just like it. 

Overall, wonderful job!!! Thank you for participating!! 

read the first letter of each line :)