I like how you take things very seriously and have these really demanded emotions that mostly every teenagers typically have which is the Age of Youth and as a fellow Beta Reader for this story, I would strongly recommend some details about the weather, how would each character feel when they develop an emotion deep down in there, and each character has many flaws and it is okay to reveal them for what they truly are. :)

(Please note that this is just an opinion, not an offensive comment.)