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感覺這篇描寫超細膩的！
1.心臟劇烈跳動用的比喻很新穎！
2.「我想要妳變成我女朋友」用斷斷續續的接吻來說完，過程太令人好奇了，也很有氣氛！
3.查理適時的出現又讓讀者們感覺更有趣了！

3 years agoReply

Wendy，Dani，Brian

謝謝你這麼說\^O^/
哈哈哈哈我也覺得那段描寫很有趣www我也喜歡女朋友那段，寫的時候嘴角是上揚的XDD
耶！查理來助攻的٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و

3 years agoReply

魚落井

雖然好老梗但是看到他們兩個終於在一起真的有感動到(*˘︶˘*).｡*♡

3 years agoReply

Wendy，Dani，Brian

XDDDD沒錯吧我寫到也覺得好老梗但還是想圓一下自己的心願wwww嗚嗚太好了你喜歡🥺✨💓💓我好開心！謝謝魚落井來看\^O^/💗

3 years agoReply

毛鼠之之

還以為會發生什麼事，原來只有親吻(誤😂

4 years agoReply

Wendy，Dani，Brian

XDDDDD之之啊哈哈哈哈！
他們才剛坦承感情，所以不會那麼快的，不過後面幾篇可能就會有機會呦wwww畢竟這算半18+的故事，而且我想盡可能貼近外國大學生:D

4 years agoReply

毛鼠之之

@Wendy，Dani，Brian,嘿嘿嘿我很期待www(已壞掉
還是恭喜更新囉❤❤

4 years agoReply

Wendy，Dani，Brian

@毛鼠之之,XDDDDDD我也很興奮ψ(｀∇´)ψ謝謝之之支持(;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)

4 years agoReply

Bommie,允瑛 sponsored 200 for Issue 39!

哇～終於等到更新惹XD❤️

4 years agoReply

Wendy，Dani，Brian

(;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)等等這什麼大驚喜！謝謝Bommie姊嗚嗚嗚

4 years agoReply

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