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2ignature Sm1ley-Face
The caged bird poem was absolutely marvelous, applauds to that :)

I like the way Sal and Valerie interacted with eachother

Overall, a really good entry
3 years agoReply
julia hope
Thank you!!
3 years agoReply
Tenshi no Yami
I've been stuck in an elevator before and it is NOT a fun time. 

Especially when you have people panicking and moving about making the lift hotter πŸ˜‘

Hopefully they got out of there
3 years agoReply
julia hope
I know someone who got stuck in the elevator with their child and I can't imagine what it feels like. Sorry you went through it. I hope so too.
3 years agoReply
Esfandiar C. Hale
This is so sweet! Hope they didn't actually die in the elevator. . . .
3 years agoReply
julia hope
Thanks! If I wrote more I definitely would've had them survive though.
3 years agoReply
Esfandiar C. Hale
@Julia Hope, oh that's a relief! 
3 years agoReply
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