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雪昭

Quote//素馨微微一笑，從袖中掏出兩錠銀子，遞給掌櫃：「兩間房。我和寶兒共住一間。」//Quote
的確是兩女一間房，只不過素馨夜訪明軒。鼓勵他找尋隱世門派。
註：「五星飯店」「風之谷」更名

1 month agoReply

久須

是我看錯了XDD
還以為寶兒小師妹還在房間，這二人竟這麼大膽阻著小師妹睡覺……

1 month agoReply

久須

哈囉，謝謝參加創作挑戰，這篇有完結，謝謝啦

這篇的文筆也是武俠小說風格，清楚易懂，本來見到風之谷與五星飯店香格里拉是有點出戲，但似乎是半戲謔風格就讓你過啦……

只是有少許想吐嘈，主角明軒不是跟寶兒同一間房嗎？既然寶兒在房間睡覺，他與素馨怎樣可以……呃，翻雲覆雨？我覺得，寶兒小帥妹也有睡覺的權利（認真

還有既然素馨是女的話，為何不跟寶兒同一房啦？這不科學XD

1 month agoReply

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