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孤蒼寰
嘩，最後的反轉我也朦了！我要破戒再多看下一章了
2 weeks agoReply
K.Versifier
謝謝你，看了好多。我這本確實在一開始塞了太多東西。
2 weeks agoReply
孤蒼寰
@K.Versifier,証明你這章的勾子很有力，和故事背景設定無關。
前面鋪的都是靜、潛伏、壓抑，到揭發亞力山大殺妻已經是高潮，然後被殺的妻子突然現身形成一個反高潮，鋪排很棒
2 weeks agoReply
K.Versifier
@孤蒼寰,哈哈，希望你看的喜歡，這是我第一次收到除開頭之外後續的評價。
2 weeks agoReply
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