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甜番薯
文笔不错，情景融入得非常恰当

只是如果我没有理解错的话，这篇有涉及到丧失记忆的部分，算是违反规则了哦。
9 months agoReply
月卿言
:)我最後才發現，記得但想到會頭疼算嗎？
9 months agoReply
月卿言
（下面忘記改了(⁠〒⁠﹏⁠〒⁠)
我寫完要傳的時候才看到不能有失憶，我真的想哭，快把它改到四不像了
9 months agoReply
甜番薯
@月卿言, 额不用改了吧我觉得，不然故事会很奇怪的
9 months agoReply
月卿言
@甜番薯,沒事按照規則，反正我都改完(⁠•⁠ ⁠▽⁠ ⁠•⁠;⁠)
9 months agoReply
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