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西諾尼亞
謝謝長長感想！！！！
沒想到會有讀者喜歡艾娜，好驚好喜🤣🤣
這是我的第一個故事，case000-001已經是將近三年前所寫了。是的，十分青澀🤣謝謝讀者大人願意看下去🫶
而愛莉莎，她絕不是單純易害羞的小妹妹🤣有機會有興趣可以追看一下喔
再次謝謝你的感想😍
4 months agoReply
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主要是那一段女主的反應太平淡，導致有些突兀。愛麗莎的個性沒問題，反差會加分，但這種「反差」要靠週遭人的反應襯托才對。我是不喜歡男女主的類型😂絕對會喜歡配角，如果是那種邪惡混沌會更愛
4 months agoReply
西諾尼亞
@玉蘿, 我也不是喜歡男女主角的類型🤣🤣我都偏愛配角
4 months agoReply
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