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大大說得沒錯，教主太在意第一集的情節，捨不得刪，其實重要的是讓大家更輕易進入後面幾集的情節才對。感激不盡！
不捨得刪我覺得每一個寫故事的人也會這樣。只要能讓讀者更容易接收的話，不用刪自然是最好，不過大概要花不少時間整理。我人比較懶，所以才會建議刪減，感覺花費的時間相對應該會少一點。