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盒誌創作 sponsored 100coins for Issue 63!
2 years agoReply
時起雲
好！
2 years agoReply
魔幻蕈菇
謝謝起雲喜歡
2 years agoReply
W.H.
好棒的詩！！我好喜歡。

最後一段👍！！

活著，帶來希望～

(我也很喜歡這首詩的節奏，「那麼/否則也該發芽了」形成內在的韻律＆帶出主題：活著⋯⋯真厲害)
2 years agoReply
魔幻蕈菇
我自己也蠻喜歡的，就是一個沒有要管押韻的任性之作XD
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@魔幻蕈菇,新詩不一定要押韻，重點是節奏；妳這首詩的節奏很棒啊。
2 years agoReply
魔幻蕈菇
@W.H.,有被你get到，開心^^
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@魔幻蕈菇,👍！！
2 years agoReply
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