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飯飯
這段寫的超好的！雖然後面感覺像是在複習前面的劇情😂😂 不過看完感覺蘇敬俊越來越暖了！
P.s第三段後面那邊有三個自己自己我有點看不懂🥲
2 years agoReply
紀芯
耶～我有進步了😂
2 years agoReply
飯飯
@紀芯,其實上一章就有進步的感覺，很喜歡那個收尾，不過缺點就是冗字太多跟敘事有點不連貫，妳的劇情編排真的很好，加油～期待妳的更新(・∀・)
P.s剛好發現妳今天生日，生日快樂ㄚ(￣∀￣)
2 years agoReply
紀芯
@飯飯,謝謝😍
2 years agoReply
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