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剑寒舟
故事的情绪描写和女主细腻刻画动作 真的让人会心一笑，而且好可爱啊

故事真的越看越甜！
1 month agoReply
阿秋Aki
這篇女主少女情懷太甜了，把女主對老師的感覺寫得很細膩。
5 months agoReply
羽璇
少女情懷總是最甜的~~
尤其又能跟老師.....嘿嘿嘿
小甜文就是要甜甜！
5 months agoReply
魯嚕嚕
「影子融為一體」這個手法挺棒的，也很適合在影視上呈現。印象最深的就是電視劇《倚天屠龍記》的趙敏，也是用影子來跟男主張無忌假牽手，將少女的小心思表露無遺。
6 months agoReply
羽璇
先從影子融為一體開始，嘿嘿～謝謝嚕嚕的閱讀！
6 months agoReply
魯嚕嚕
@羽璇,不客氣喔~
6 months agoReply
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