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Besides being flat out incorrect, it's a bit jarring to the reader. It should read as "My woman? Hardly to say, so what's new?"
Basically: " My woman ? Hardly to say, so what's new ? " ----> "My woman? Hardly to say, so what's new?"
Just my two cents, and it'll probably take forever to edit all of it, but you've otherwise done a really nice job. :)