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感謝叔叔的評語！這100p 真是物超所值。我確實是寫作新手，對標點符號的運用還不太熟悉。寫作風格也還在摸索中，二三章比較古韻單純就只是那時候正在看金庸的小說，被影響了（笑）。想起來，寫頭三章的時候已是三、四年前的事情了，也是時侯來個大修改！再次感謝評語！辛苦了！