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Wendy，Dani，Brian
喬爾的話剛好解答了前幾篇我的疑問XDD哇賈蒂娜快戒煙啊啊啊啊
我喜歡喬爾跟賈斯汀的對話，而且作者控制三人對話的速度真的恰到好處，台詞不會生硬很像電影編劇事先安排好的🥹🥹🥹哈特妮絲真的很容易讓長官印象深刻XDDD
1 year agoReply
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我覺得對話讀起來自不自然很重要，所以都會盡量讓角色間的對談就跟一般人熟悉的對談很接近～
1 year agoReply
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