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描寫為什麼哭的情緒，也是「重點描寫」哭的情形的重要部分，當然符合標準啦！
擔心至親的情緒必須在一眾漠然的人中間隱忍，更甚還有原以為是同伴的不作為，到了家人前才終於流淚而出，以及最後被家人逗之後的破涕而笑，情緒描寫的轉折很自然呢！