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TLC這篇,我其實本來就打算做成短篇,不過看過其他人評之後,我感覺能考慮考慮等後面的章節更完把其中一些段落再重新改改拉長,可能鋪陳會比較順⋯吧?
所以人物、劇情進展有設計,但是細節不多,覺得加上去應該會更好!