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新手求點評
豆雅
#1
文章寫完啦,雖然不是什麼驚天地、泣鬼神的大作,
但是我用心寫下的每一個字(心虛),每一行都經過來回打量(雖然還是可能漏字、用詞奇怪或標點暴走)。
文筆還在練,節奏偶爾踩錯拍,情緒有時下手太重(或太輕),
如果你讀完有什麼想說的,真的非常歡迎留言點評——
不管是溫柔地拍拍我,還是指出:「這段怪怪的」,
我都會非常感激,然後默默抄進筆記本裡學起來!
如果願意幫忙糾錯、提建議,我會認真回覆每一條ㄉ!
連結在此:
https://www.penana.com/story/186901/%E6%BD%AE%E8%90%BD%E4%B9%8B%E6%99%82
這篇有點彎彎繞繞的,找時間會再精修一下!
3 days ago
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月見雪下
#2
太奇怪了,實在太奇怪了!為什麼奶茶會灑在鍵盤上的?(哭)
3 days ago
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豆雅
@月見雪下, 好吧,那我還是把紅茶撒到鍵盤上好了(心虛)
2 days ago
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但是我用心寫下的每一個字(心虛),每一行都經過來回打量(雖然還是可能漏字、用詞奇怪或標點暴走)。
文筆還在練,節奏偶爾踩錯拍,情緒有時下手太重(或太輕),
如果你讀完有什麼想說的,真的非常歡迎留言點評——
不管是溫柔地拍拍我,還是指出:「這段怪怪的」,
我都會非常感激,然後默默抄進筆記本裡學起來!
如果願意幫忙糾錯、提建議,我會認真回覆每一條ㄉ!
連結在此:
https://www.penana.com/story/186901/%E6%BD%AE%E8%90%BD%E4%B9%8B%E6%99%82
這篇有點彎彎繞繞的,找時間會再精修一下!