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長篇伏筆
默默無文
#1
目前在連載(頗佛系)的作品預計會是個大長篇,但伏筆不少,後期有多條線要收。
不過現在比較擔心的是其實這部前期(感覺)還挺平凡的,只帶出了個看起來像主線(表面上)的支線,而真正的主線大概還需要不少回才會被帶出來。
這種前期平鋪直敘,後期才開始反轉或揭露的寫法,是不是不容易留住讀者?畢竟前面看了無聊就棄了的可能頗大...。
2 days ago
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子不語
#2
你的問題就是你的答案。
2 days ago
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月見雪下
#3
這種前期平鋪直敘,後期才開始反轉或揭露的寫法,是不是不容易留住讀者?畢竟前面看了無聊就棄了的可能頗大...。
是的,當初《命運石之門》也不知怎樣看完的,我甚至把《化物語》看完了
2 days ago
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九殿下
#4
除非你是大神,知名作家,可以前期平鋪直敘,後期反轉。因為有忠實fans對你的作品有信心,知道作品的後期會有驚喜。可假如你是新人作者,那麼狠容易流失讀者。
不過,前期很精彩,中期趨於平淡一樣流失讀者……🤣🤣網文這東西要三章一個小高潮,五章一個大高潮,才能讓讀者追到結尾。
2 days ago
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豆雅
#5
不是無事發生,是風雨還在山後。但就算藏得再深,也得讓人知道值得挖。
22 hours ago
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不過現在比較擔心的是其實這部前期(感覺)還挺平凡的,只帶出了個看起來像主線(表面上)的支線,而真正的主線大概還需要不少回才會被帶出來。
這種前期平鋪直敘,後期才開始反轉或揭露的寫法,是不是不容易留住讀者?畢竟前面看了無聊就棄了的可能頗大...。
是的,當初《命運石之門》也不知怎樣看完的,我甚至把《化物語》看完了
不過,前期很精彩,中期趨於平淡一樣流失讀者……🤣🤣網文這東西要三章一個小高潮,五章一個大高潮,才能讓讀者追到結尾。