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浪人旅社第一屆，讀者提問意見大會
ENTRY #1
Author: 海貍
Published:
Oct 30, 2022
浪人旅社第一屆，讀者提問意見大會
Published:
Oct 30, 2022
ENTRY #1
一點小小的心得（1-16章）
Author: 海貍
Published:
Oct 30, 2022
1 Min Read
202 Words
No Plagiarism!cOnoJvOb4MNGg08OR1G8posted on PＥNAＮＡ

剛剛看完書來的！不過我只有看到16章。

首先，設定及劇情的安排都十分有趣。作者利用星際時代作為背景，且是第四次世界大戰之後，世界觀十分龐大。

主角在退役前曾經經歷了一場全隊被殲滅的任務，而後才回到家鄉開設了浪人旅社。若我沒理解錯誤，這場任務的內幕便是主角所要尋找的真相。

懸念與伏筆都有了，不過在人物的塑造上稍微有些可惜。

角色的性格較為平面，且對話內容無法凸顯出他們的特色，建議可以在這方面多琢磨一下。

加油！小說的設定很新穎，希望能持續看到你的創作！

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