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蜉蝣千日筆記
ISSUE #3
Author: 悠波（Yuippoi）
Published:
Dec 7, 2022
蜉蝣千日筆記
Author: 悠波（Yuippoi）
Published:
Dec 7, 2022
ISSUE #3
任性地再次重寫
No Plagiarism!ZYQOjwDwv8h6rWPCe4X2posted on PＥNAＮＡ

一早鼓起勇氣，在群組裡詢問有沒有人可以幫忙看文提供建議，沒想到好幾位大佬都挺身而出，給予了寶貴的建議。

拜讀大佬的意見，我只覺得「對對對，說的太對了」，心裡也浮現了許多新想法，因此當下決定再次大修。

雖然可能無法把缺點都改正過來，但是獲得了珍貴的意見，開始重修之際，是雀躍地睡不著覺的。

這次的改法不像以前的改改錯字，涉及故事的背景設定，也要不停的思考新的建議，著實較為費神，速度比較慢一些…。

最後，原本考慮著要不要重開一篇新文，也確實先重開了，但總覺得會造成已經看過的人的困擾，而且再重寫的話，總有一天《天鏡》會滿天飛…好在找到了「返回草稿」按鈕，現在完成度不高，先直接收回重造吧。

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