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小說「最後君王」求評
ENTRY #1
Author: 滔江社
Published:
Feb 17, 2023
小說「最後君王」求評
Published:
Feb 17, 2023
ENTRY #1
簡單評價
Author: 滔江社
Published:
Feb 17, 2023
1 Min Read
246 Words
No Plagiarism!6srf4lv9tHhZVrsJ6yD5posted on PＥNAＮＡ

我用了三十分鐘看了看你的小說，以下為個人主觀評價而已

1）一篇的字數太短。其實這可能是我的一個強迫症吧，我大概一篇文章也會至少寫2000字才算數（雖然你會看見我沒有任何小說，是有一個圖鑑和一個散文集，其實兩個都是散文集。。。因為我本身的小說我嫌不夠好所以刪除了再來）。太短的話有什麼壞處？那就是太簡短，太簡單，解釋得不清楚，而且會很容易故事發展速度過快，失去了很多中間的聯繫。所以有時候迫自己多寫一些字數，寫得仔細點會更好

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2）故事發展速度有點快。我不知道是因為你真的打算那麼急還是怎樣，但看著看著感覺速度真的很快（尤其是頭四篇）就是。。。感覺有點飄。

448Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZDWFs1lg2l

就這樣

216.73.216.82

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