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沒辦法隱藏追蹤的替代品。
ISSUE #1
Author: 倒提壺
Published:
Feb 21, 2023
沒辦法隱藏追蹤的替代品。
Author: 倒提壺
Published:
Feb 21, 2023
ISSUE #1
الصيد البري - رقصة الموت - خناس
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前面的主角身份很清楚但行走過程有點淡算是都用風景表達，但是科技觀念等級有點意思。最後切換到學者視角算是點亮整個故事，感覺到主角不是同等級生物的立體感。

寫風景那邊我看到有點放棄了，因為用詞漂亮但是我沒有看風景的興趣。主角性格不激昂，所以還不至於直接放棄閱讀，算是跟風景滿搭的。

不過不明白文案上說的「王冠」在故事裡是什麼，後記滿有趣的，不論排版或內容。

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沒辦法隱藏追蹤的替代品。
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