第一卷已修改完成並發佈。
正在第二卷新添加的內容中苦惱，要表達出心目中角色的想法，而且正確把內容傳達給閱讀的人，遠比想像中要困難，但會努力完成的。
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第一卷修改內容：
修改句子與字眼，令閱讀更通順。
事件、劇情淺白化。
添加新內容，提早顯示與解釋伏筆。
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