雖然人鬼愛情我喜歡，但整體故事有點過於沉重，我們先從簡介說起。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRzFlL1hEHY
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有明確點出作品的主題要點，這點我給好評。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpNDigYU3H1
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不少作品在簡介處都打得跟狗屎一樣，就算內容再怎麼精彩，我也不會去看。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwN7PR288rC
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因為我們在書局也是先看簡介，去決定是否要購買這本書對吧?
觀看序章的時候，其實會有點過於煩悶。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ22UvBy8YNX
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可能是主題有點政治敏感，是關於台灣跟中共那邊的關係。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDchPKlBG56
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另外有一處必須給予好評的，就是對於男主角的刻畫。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIim0SBRhx7
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由於是陰陽眼，所以有時不經意的舉動會讓其他人感到匪夷所思。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC7uPFXIUy3
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作者有表達出第三人對主角的看法，以及主角內心真實的想法。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH0m7nGl3dv
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這點我是覺得處理的不錯。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUO93qs1YYJ
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由於本人特別喜歡觀察角色的刻畫，在這點我覺得有滿足到。
再來畫面感跟代入感的問題，是我覺得對於這個作品來說最嚴重的弊端。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwhKcww4PCo
660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCMc9MTRyAJ
可能是序章的關係，我個人是覺得序章很爛，說實在的。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz0IfT6jMlx
660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGI0NVpNE8R
序章的東西可以簡單帶過，直接切入主角跟同伴玩耍。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7qrqZqlQLu
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同一時間，在陰間正有一對陌生男女正在廝殺，我覺得這種對比的衝擊感會比較強烈。
文筆整體流暢，並不會有太多奇怪的地方。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmjIm2wVFGS
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至於剛剛所說的畫面感跟代入感的問題，有覺得很多時候人物在進行對話的時候，他們沒有一些動作或是表情嗎?
雖然作者有把男女主角的對話設計的逗趣一點，但個人我覺得還差點味。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3KUZgfiXY5
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最後有三點評語:
1.差評: 建議每章的字數不要那麼多，其實看得很累。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpUjaYS3vQU
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2.好評: 在第二章結束時，有強烈畫面感。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXRlMLTq0mr
阿麒跟女主親吻過後，女主消失的那種失落，那種不捨，有明確表達出來。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjvtUVZgAdh
在來以蒲公英作為一個完美的斷點，這點值得讓這部作品整體昇華了一個層次。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6YkicxMHnF
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3.阿麒的人際關係。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKStkFTZxGm
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小時候對於比較特殊的小孩，通常會被同儕冠上異類、怪胎等詞語。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0qvI1LcJm9
照理來說，應該要這樣的。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHFA9uokzEv
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男主角的人際關係不好，在某一次的契機下遇到了女主角，並發現了女主角才是真心為了好，為她著想的人，並發展出純純的愛，最後女主消失，這樣不是會更有情緒波動嗎?660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDVPBDvmRGk
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這算是我的個人寫法，其實也不算是評語，只是單純如果是我會以這樣的角度下去撰寫故事。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJzaVa0CJhv
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結尾: 660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVXg3boYryI
文筆不錯，但代入感差了點。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0XIERG7S5M
劇情如果是都市愛情可能我會比較喜歡，但這也是我個人的想法。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh3IblKE52f
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節奏方面還算可以，由衷建議分開章節。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡToySOeJATh
不然一章那麼多，我看得很累。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhWW38UnLb3
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記憶點唯有跟老婆接吻後消失的部分。
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分數:˙ 70660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnLhz4kAr7J
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本來要給60而已，風兒的文筆算不差，給這分數不會不合理。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcHrF6QRAtq
但至於為什麼要加十分呢，五分是在於封面有吸引力，五分在於第二章的結尾拿捏的有到位。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLcTo4jzkFZ
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原本想用力噴的，但這部確實不爛。660Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuEzqQrXrdl
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算是蕉園佳作。
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