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解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(上)
ENTRY #17
Author: W.H.
Published:
May 4, 2023
解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(上)
Published:
May 4, 2023
ENTRY #17
【非示範・非參賽】唱和三首 (漢俳)
Author: W.H.
Published:
May 4, 2023
1 Min Read
204 Words
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〈唱和 1：呼應＃10、＃11〉

廟寺無厝蓋

天叫雷公莫等待

一掌劈落來

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(厝蓋＝屋頂)

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〈唱和 2：呼應＃11〉

棉被是座山

兩人攜手同揮汗

天在遠處看

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〈唱和 3：呼應＃11〉

以為遮得住

低估天眼的強度

無孔也能入

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⓵ 漢俳：「五、七、五」的句式，韻腳可押可不押，不像日本俳句要求放「季語」(和季節有關的語句)，感覺較為寬鬆。

[關於漢俳]

https://toyboy17.pixnet.net/blog/post/56751452

⓶ 關於「唱和詩」

https://baike.baidu.com/item/%E5%94%90%E4%BB%A3%E5%94%B1%E5%92%8C%E8%AF%97%E7%A0%94%E7%A9%B6/16996896

嚴格來說，「唱和詩」應該跟原詩的形式相同，不過此創挑沒那麼嚴格(啊就我開的～)，就來玩玩囉。

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