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解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(中)【事故樓】
ENTRY #1
Author: W.H.
Published:
May 10, 2023
解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(中)【事故樓】
Published:
May 10, 2023
ENTRY #1
【示範】唐詩解構：李白的〈黃鶴樓送孟浩然之廣陵〉by 洛夫
Author: W.H.
Published:
May 10, 2023
1 Min Read
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參賽作品，必須包括上述三要素：

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⓵ 原詩/詞/句

⓶ 原標題和原作者；如果古今名言確實有名，但出處不明，請註明「目前出處不明」or 類似字眼

⓷ 參賽者自己的詩作(含詩題)

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格式不拘，要放在最前面、最後面、中間也都不限，只要能讓人找到就行了。

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【示範開始】

唐詩解構：李白的〈黃鶴樓送孟浩然之廣陵〉by 洛夫

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[原作]

故人西辭黃鶴樓，煙花三月下揚州。

孤帆遠影碧空盡，唯見長江天際流。

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[解構新作]

檣帆遠去

帶走了黃鶴樓昨夜的酒意

還有你的柳絲

我的長亭

帶走了你孤寒的背影

還有滿船的詩稿和離情

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孤帆越行越遠，越小

及至

更小

只見一隻小小水鳥

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橫江飛去

再見，請多珍重

小心三月揚州的風雨

還有桃花

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【洛夫的詩和字】

http://www.fengtipoeticclub.com/lohfu/lohfu-a094.html

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